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Via, Via, Valleria
Sitting in her galleria
Surrounded by her playthings, and what not
Ashen skin hidden within
In her satin, velvet exposition,
Behind the robes and ribbons
In the most awkward position
“And why always these games we play?”
She questions now her disposition
“Why like children, day by day
Toying with the words we say
Playing with their feelings
Like a crystal ball, and leering
As they cry once the game’s over
Once it’s time to throw the cold shoulder
Once it’s time to show emotions
We get scared; we get cautious
We bend backwards, always trying
To keep him and her from crying
Steering them in a direction
That might expose true affection
Questing always for the thing
That’ll allow one’s soul to sing
A joyous melody
A tune to praise
The heart and soul
And perhaps raise
Another miracle”

Like Valleria
Always in her galleria
Surrounded by her playthings
Behind her velvet ribbons
Tied in a most awkward position
Striving toward your eventual vision
©2006-2009 ~MoonShadowDemon
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Author's Comments

A simple poem I wrote for a close friend of mine.

I haven't written anything for a WHILE, so excuse moi, should this be a bit choppy.

As always, this piece is open for interpretation, so I'd ADORE to hear not only what you think OF it, but also what you think this is about.

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:iconjeannie64:
hey read this over and over even read it backwards and it all fits perfectly eitherway great stuff like this piece a lot
i can see a very sexual situation here
the ladies a temptress is she an artists model

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life is like a bowl of jelly it takes little to upset the balance

~jeannie64
:iconmoonshadowdemon:
Thank you! :heart:

As for your interpritation: LOVELY! :XD: :heart:

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well was i on the mark or wrong in my interpritation
keep up the good work
i will be watching ok jx

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life is like a bowl of jelly it takes little to upset the balance

~jeannie64
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I wanted the feeling of that there. Something scandalous, something sensual almost, but with an underlying meaning that COMPLETELY contrasted it. You definetly got the suface details, and put your own spin on it, and for that I congradulate you.

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credit where its due is one of my motos great work keep it up im really pleased i guessed the subject matter it was so powerful i visualize this lady now thats art jx

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~jeannie64
:iconmoonshadowdemon:
Thank you, again!
:heart:

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keep an eye on my work i like getting comments no matter if theyre positive or negative it gives me that something
to strive for i will watch your work xj

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life is like a bowl of jelly it takes little to upset the balance

~jeannie64
:iconmoonshadowdemon:
Alrighty, deal!
:D

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hey give me a shout on msn or hotmail me xj

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~jeannie64

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